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   Renra

   March 17, 2014, 4:37 pm | # | Reply

   Typo: Last panel, first bubble, second sentence: …hate most of it all…
   Also the second sentence in the first bubble, first panel is off – try reading it aloud, something is missing, the best I can come up with: …what the hell of a game… . I`m not sure if that’s the way you want her to say it, maybe thats not strong enough…

   That last panel, the shadows on Aileanas’ skin, her expression, I can even see her eyes looking in Ishs’ direction – just great!
   And the water! I know I`ve told you before and you explained, but still, it`s just unbelievable! I’d take a swim. =)

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     admin

     March 17, 2014, 4:58 pm | # | Reply

     Top panel corrected…I couldn’t find any typo in the last panel so it stays. Glad you love the water BTW.

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       Renra

       March 18, 2014, 3:02 pm | # | Reply

       You are right with the last panel, sorry for wasting your time.
       I really love the water, it still looks incredible – am I repeating myself?

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