Typo: Last panel, first bubble, second sentence: …hate most of it all…
Also the second sentence in the first bubble, first panel is off – try reading it aloud, something is missing, the best I can come up with: …what the hell of a game… . I`m not sure if that’s the way you want her to say it, maybe thats not strong enough…
That last panel, the shadows on Aileanas’ skin, her expression, I can even see her eyes looking in Ishs’ direction – just great!
And the water! I know I`ve told you before and you explained, but still, it`s just unbelievable! I’d take a swim. =)
Typo: Last panel, first bubble, second sentence: …hate most of it all…
Also the second sentence in the first bubble, first panel is off – try reading it aloud, something is missing, the best I can come up with: …what the hell of a game… . I`m not sure if that’s the way you want her to say it, maybe thats not strong enough…
That last panel, the shadows on Aileanas’ skin, her expression, I can even see her eyes looking in Ishs’ direction – just great!
And the water! I know I`ve told you before and you explained, but still, it`s just unbelievable! I’d take a swim. =)
Top panel corrected…I couldn’t find any typo in the last panel so it stays. Glad you love the water BTW.
You are right with the last panel, sorry for wasting your time.
I really love the water, it still looks incredible – am I repeating myself? 😉