Thorondor “Ian” Caladharas is the 18 year old heir to one of the first of the Merchant Houses. An intelligent, independent teenager; Ian has a tendency towards irreverence and and frustration. In all honesty, he doesn’t care what his grandfather says he is heir to, he just wants to have a normal life. Or at least as normal a one as possible. (As my skills improved I made some revamps to this characters appearance to reflect aging and such as well. The top picture is how he is currently modeled. )
Moira Mebhe is Taioseach of the House of the same name. Originally based out of Amonson-Lancaster City, most of her House was wiped out in the nuclear incident that devastated the island.
Not so much…
Kira was killed on the 9th
Targeter and company flew out on the 9th/10th
Jonathan and Esther found the Chandler Connection on the 11th
While the bodies at Chandler Industries were discovered on the 12th, the massacre happened on the 11th/12th
The comic you linked to is on the 12th.
Today’s comic is on the 13th. I see no issue. All of these are, after all, dated.
I was more concerned with the event rate but it appears to be handled. 😉
I was only now starting the timeline analysis, something I do on my stories constantly. I know you tend to work your character’s asses off 😉
It occurs to me that Adah might be able to help with that 😉
We are getting a severe case of time compression here. It has to be at least 2-3 days since http://requiem.spiderforest.com/?comic=2017-04-28 But it appears to be the same day.
Not so much…
Kira was killed on the 9th
Targeter and company flew out on the 9th/10th
Jonathan and Esther found the Chandler Connection on the 11th
While the bodies at Chandler Industries were discovered on the 12th, the massacre happened on the 11th/12th
The comic you linked to is on the 12th.
Today’s comic is on the 13th. I see no issue. All of these are, after all, dated.
I was more concerned with the event rate but it appears to be handled. 😉
I was only now starting the timeline analysis, something I do on my stories constantly. I know you tend to work your character’s asses off 😉
It just occured to me; are Adah and Etain both a few years older than Ian and Julia?
Yeah, I know that Adah could be millennia older 😉