Whew! I just binge-read this entire novella over the last couple of weeks, and all I can say is great job – I am hooked. Great character development, intriguing story lines (lots of them!), and fully adult. It has been interesting to follow your “style” evolution and character visualization over the 11 years you have been writing this story. Dana is a fox – keep her just the way she is!
Glad you like it, and I hope you stick with us….
And Dana will be showing up again next week as part of an intermission section.