Thorondor “Ian” Caladharas is the 18 year old heir to one of the first of the Merchant Houses. An intelligent, independent teenager; Ian has a tendency towards irreverence and and frustration. In all honesty, he doesn’t care what his grandfather says he is heir to, he just wants to have a normal life. Or at least as normal a one as possible. (As my skills improved I made some revamps to this characters appearance to reflect aging and such as well. The top picture is how he is currently modeled. )
Julia Wells, significant other of Ian Caladharas. Julia co runs the Wells Hotel in Erech’s Clocktower District. For those people who have rpg’d in this world: The Wells Hotel is now known as Cytheron’s. Julia and Ian tied the knot in the City of Greyrest in the Crossing Territories.
@Slamlander, I got it fixed…When I took a first look at it, I had just got doing a series of 8 designs at work, and my eyes were about to start bleeding, and I missed it completely.
The worst part of it all is that while I use a spell checker, the wrong word I had in the box was perfectly spelled so I missed it that way too.
You know you’re doing a great job when the only thing people can complain about is the occasional typo. This is a terrific story and an insight into many of the characters. Just like real people, they behave differently at different times with motivations that also change with time. As a story, this is probably the best section yet.
I think that you have a typo on the second panel.
@Slamlander, If you are referring to the casual/casualty thing, that’s not a typo.
@James Roden, Nope but it looks like you fixed it 😉
@Slamlander, I got it fixed…When I took a first look at it, I had just got doing a series of 8 designs at work, and my eyes were about to start bleeding, and I missed it completely.
The worst part of it all is that while I use a spell checker, the wrong word I had in the box was perfectly spelled so I missed it that way too.
@James Roden, Yeah, I get caught be those too. Try that in a 170K+ word novel. Post-facto editing isn’t fun. 😉
c(_) cheers, The Slamlander
The typo: “We did what *he* had to do.” The *he* should presumably be a *we*.
@Mayhem, Caught it and fixed it.
You know you’re doing a great job when the only thing people can complain about is the occasional typo. This is a terrific story and an insight into many of the characters. Just like real people, they behave differently at different times with motivations that also change with time. As a story, this is probably the best section yet.
Great job!
Ken