Thorondor “Ian” Caladharas is the 18 year old heir to one of the first of the Merchant Houses. An intelligent, independent teenager; Ian has a tendency towards irreverence and and frustration. In all honesty, he doesn’t care what his grandfather says he is heir to, he just wants to have a normal life. Or at least as normal a one as possible. (As my skills improved I made some revamps to this characters appearance to reflect aging and such as well. The top picture is how he is currently modeled. )
middle panel, Ish´s bubble: I think it’s either you’ve run or you ran?
I like the shadows on her legs.
I didn’t notice due to Ish’s head being turned slightly, but is she his grandmother?