Typo: Last panel, first bubble, second sentence: …hate most of it all…
Also the second sentence in the first bubble, first panel is off – try reading it aloud, something is missing, the best I can come up with: …what the hell of a game… . I`m not sure if that’s the way you want her to say it, maybe thats not strong enough…
That last panel, the shadows on Aileanas’ skin, her expression, I can even see her eyes looking in Ishs’ direction – just great!
And the water! I know I`ve told you before and you explained, but still, it`s just unbelievable! I’d take a swim. =)
Also the second sentence in the first bubble, first panel is off – try reading it aloud, something is missing, the best I can come up with: …what the hell of a game… . I`m not sure if that’s the way you want her to say it, maybe thats not strong enough…
That last panel, the shadows on Aileanas’ skin, her expression, I can even see her eyes looking in Ishs’ direction – just great!
And the water! I know I`ve told you before and you explained, but still, it`s just unbelievable! I’d take a swim. =)
Top panel corrected…I couldn’t find any typo in the last panel so it stays. Glad you love the water BTW.
I really love the water, it still looks incredible – am I repeating myself? 😉