Internet and phone service are back up and running again! Restart date is going to be September 25, 2023. I need a little time to get back into the groove with things, plus a family member has some medical issues that are going on next week as well.
This lady (who chooses to remain nameless) is professional assassin who hails from the city of Naglorond. She does most of her work for private citizens since the end of the House Wars, where she was responsible for the deaths of a number of House personnel.
The handle she is currently using is “Targeter” All that is known about her so far is that she was a child prostitute in Naglorond who killed her way out of the business , and decided to never put her fate in the hands of another ever again.
As long as the continuty is ok, and as long as you don’t have the same character in two places during the same periods of time, you’ll be doing good. I haven’t noticed any real problem with that, but I’ve been reading for pleasure, myself. IMHO, it’s a great story, James.
In real life, things are messy, and you never get all of the ‘loose strings’ tied up into a neat little package.
A common mistake for storytellers and their listeners/readers is to try to make everything fit perfectly, with no ‘loose strings’ in the story line.
That said, some parts of the plot are too important to be left swinging in the breeze. …unless you’ve been planning on writing sequels to the story.