Dana McAllen is a member of the urban exploration association that is currently investigating remnants of the worlds previous civilization. She initially made her debut in the Tunnelrunners side comic. She has been Ian's closest friend since early childhood, and is still his closest confidant.
Julia Wells, significant other of Ian Caladharas. Julia co runs the Wells Hotel in Erech’s Clocktower District. For those people who have rpg’d in this world: The Wells Hotel is now known as Cytheron’s. Julia and Ian tied the knot in the City of Greyrest in the Crossing Territories.
Should possible drop “around for” altogether. It looks like you started writing it one way and changed your mind part way through the sentence. I do it too 😉
Possible typo, last panel, first speech bubble:
“I was around …” should possibly be “It was around …”
Should possible drop “around for” altogether. It looks like you started writing it one way and changed your mind part way through the sentence. I do it too 😉
I didn’t change my mind. It was never a typo in the first place. I wrote it out exactly the way I wanted it to be.
Rubbs eyes and stares again … eh?
Uh … okay. *wanders off thinking, something else has changed but can’t reliably remember the original text. Starts feeling every day of 58.*